Before the next song, High school final essays of English

Analysis of a poem from the anthology, "Before the Next Song and Other Poems"

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The poem Before the Next Song is a comment about social vices which mar the social fabric. The poet
tackles the subject of moral decadence in a graphic manner. Issues such as prostitution, rather than
being glorified, are presented in immense contempt. As a titular work of art for the anthology as a
whole, the poem is rich, not only in thematic concerns but also in stylistic features.
The first part focuses on the activities taking place inside a night club at night where people are gathered
to have pleasure. The second part shifts the focus to some place just outside the night club where the
ladies of the night lie in ambush waiting to pounce on unwary men.
The poem opens on a disappointing note. Music is abruptly interrupted by a scratch on the record as the
needle is "leap-frogging". The hyperbole of leap-frogging indicates an awkward behaviour. This conjures
up a society that is engaged in bizarre activities that punctuate the smooth flow of life. The combination
of onomatopoeia and repetition on the word "delek" has a cacophonous sound effect that suggests
chaos in the society. This is reinforced by the personification of the juke-box which "coughs". The word
"cough" connotes an unhealthy state. The poet argues that there are social ills that affect the society
rendering it dysfunctional.
Social disorder is accentuated by the jagged structure of the poem. The poem therefore can be
considered as an epitome of concrete poem or shape poem since its visual appearance matches with its
subject matter. One word lines are placed side by side with multiple worded ones. Some stanzas are
made up of just one word but their effect is heightened by apposite punctuation and indentation.
"Smash!" is a fully-fledged onomatopoeic stanza. It signals the abrupt pause of music. The use of the
word "smash'" to denote silence is paradoxical as the word is normally used to refer to violent sound.
The poet illustrates that the instantaneous "quick hush" brings discord rather than tranquility since it
comes at a time when it is least expected, thus disturbing the flow of music. The use of the exclamation
mark introduces exasperation on the part of the 'clubbers' who are thrown off balance while in the
middle of dancing. The poet's thrust here is on the intrusive practices that threaten to disrupt the
society.
By employing the biblical allusion of "Adam" and "Eve", the poet suggests that mankind in its totality has
lost the moral compass. According to the bible, Adam and Eve are the first parents and as such, they
represent all human beings. Men are seen "clutching the air for support", a clear indication that the
moral principles have been ditched by the society.There is general filth signalled by the olfactory image
of "a heavy pursuing odour". The simile of "sweat drops shaken from an enemy's fist" also adds to the
notion of filth by introducing an unpleasant visual image. The two images generate disgust which the
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The poem Before the Next Song is a comment about social vices which mar the social fabric. The poet tackles the subject of moral decadence in a graphic manner. Issues such as prostitution, rather than being glorified, are presented in immense contempt. As a titular work of art for the anthology as a whole, the poem is rich, not only in thematic concerns but also in stylistic features. The first part focuses on the activities taking place inside a night club at night where people are gathered to have pleasure. The second part shifts the focus to some place just outside the night club where the ladies of the night lie in ambush waiting to pounce on unwary men. The poem opens on a disappointing note. Music is abruptly interrupted by a scratch on the record as the needle is "leap-frogging". The hyperbole of leap-frogging indicates an awkward behaviour. This conjures up a society that is engaged in bizarre activities that punctuate the smooth flow of life. The combination of onomatopoeia and repetition on the word "delek" has a cacophonous sound effect that suggests chaos in the society. This is reinforced by the personification of the juke-box which "coughs". The word "cough" connotes an unhealthy state. The poet argues that there are social ills that affect the society rendering it dysfunctional. Social disorder is accentuated by the jagged structure of the poem. The poem therefore can be considered as an epitome of concrete poem or shape poem since its visual appearance matches with its subject matter. One word lines are placed side by side with multiple worded ones. Some stanzas are made up of just one word but their effect is heightened by apposite punctuation and indentation. "Smash!" is a fully-fledged onomatopoeic stanza. It signals the abrupt pause of music. The use of the word "smash'" to denote silence is paradoxical as the word is normally used to refer to violent sound. The poet illustrates that the instantaneous "quick hush" brings discord rather than tranquility since it comes at a time when it is least expected, thus disturbing the flow of music. The use of the exclamation mark introduces exasperation on the part of the 'clubbers' who are thrown off balance while in the middle of dancing. The poet's thrust here is on the intrusive practices that threaten to disrupt the society. By employing the biblical allusion of "Adam" and "Eve", the poet suggests that mankind in its totality has lost the moral compass. According to the bible, Adam and Eve are the first parents and as such, they represent all human beings. Men are seen "clutching the air for support", a clear indication that the moral principles have been ditched by the society.There is general filth signalled by the olfactory image of "a heavy pursuing odour". The simile of "sweat drops shaken from an enemy's fist" also adds to the notion of filth by introducing an unpleasant visual image. The two images generate disgust which the

poet uses as a tool to show disapproval towards the unorthodox behaviour exhibited by the members of the society. Alcoholism is criticised mercilessly. The poet contends that alcoholism diminishes the ability to judge prudently thus leading to risky behaviours. Slurred speech has been used to demonstrate that alcohol can impair speech. Distorted articulation brings out a mocking tone. The poet is ridiculing the man for failure to produce a well formed speech because of the effect of alcohol. The man also struggles to walk properly as his limbs are now "wet clay pillars". The man's endeavour to walk is emphasised by the metaphor of "wading in mercury" since mercury is a heavy liquid metal. A tactile image of a heavy object is created by this metaphor to suggest that the man feels as if his legs are too heavy to walk. The wall that "looms ahead" speaks volumes about the society's moral position. The wall is personified as a person who is "dressed in graffiti". Dirty language and obscene drawings can be seen on the wall. This alludes to the moral deterioration of the society. It insinuates that the society has acquired a new set of moral standards in place of the original upright ones. The previous moral principles have been veiled by the 'dress'. The poet thus castigates modernity particularly the way it is manifests itself in urban areas. To emphasise this, the poet uses legal language "in flagrante delicto" to register his condemnation. The phrase is in Latin and can be loosely translated into English as "caught red handed". The allusion to the "Jurassic Park" denotes non-nativeness of the modern lifestyle. The film "Jurassic Park" satirises the de-extinction attempt which was meant to revive dinosaurs and other ancient animals. The poet therefore laughs at people who try to introduce practices that are foreign and detrimental to the society. Prostitution is an indictment of the society. The close proximity of the prostitute to the wall which is littered with filthy language serves to illustrate that the poet is experiencing repugnance towards prostitution. The simile of "gravel ladled with polythene spoon" buttresses the notion of disgust introduced earlier on in the poem. The voice of the prostitute is sensual hence the poet describes it as "soft". Only the voice is enough to set the man's heart throbbing "like Chitako-chaNgonya's drum". This implies that the man is sexually aroused by the coaxing voice of the prostitute for he eventually "steers" the woman towards a car, where they engage in sexual intercourse. The poet deplores alcohol for it impairs judgement thus making it easy for people to engage in casual sex. The poet's semantic field suggests that the society is no longer a safe place to be. The word "snake" creates terror and fear. When the snake pauses "to listen", it is readying itself to strike its victim. The poet suggests that there are dangers looming in the society. The poem therefore can be read as a