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Kwame Nkrumah University of Science & Technology, Kumasi, Ghana
COMMUNICATION SKILLS I
(ENGL 157)
DEPARTMENT OF ENGLISH
ERRORS IN SENTENCES
AMBIGUITY MISRELATED/DANGLING MODIFICATION
AMBIGUITY
- (^) Ambiguity is a language situation where a
sentence or a part of it has more than one
meaning or can reasonably be given more
than one interpretation.
- (^) Eg. I met Mr. Anane at the court.
- (^) The possible interpretations to this
sentence emanate from the possible uses
of “Court”.
AMBIGUITY cont’d
Please note: Intended Vs. Unintended Ambiguity
- (^) Intended Ambiguity: This is where a speaker/writer deliberately uses ambiguity for specific purpose/effect. Eg. In literature, politics, music etc.
- (^) Consider this, “The law is not an empty barrel but the House of Lords (HoLs)”.
- (^) Meaning 1: The law is not an empty barrel but the law is the HoLs.
- (^) Meaning 2: The law is not an empty barrel, but the HoLs is an empty barrel.
AMBIGUITY cont’d
- (^) The speaker can refer to M1 to avoid the charge of Contempt of Parliament though he/she may have intended to abuse the HoLs with M2.
- (^) Unintended Ambiguity: This is where a speaker/writer is not aware that what he/she said or wrote is ambiguous.
- (^) Our concern, on the subject of ambiguity, principally lies on the ambiguous statement which is not intended because it is a feature of bad writing/speech and must be avoided for effective communication.
TYPES OF AMBIGUITY cont’d
- (^) Conceptual Ambiguity: This occurs when a
word is used to refer to different concepts
- (^) Eg1. The battery was fully charged (electricity)
- (^) Eg2. He was charged with contempt (legal)
- (^) Eg3. The Registrar was charged with
students’ affairs (responsibility)
TYPES OF AMBIGUITY cont’d
- (^) Structural Ambiguity: This occurs as a result of how words are put together as structures.
- (^) It occurs from many sources. Some of these are:
- Unclear Modification
- Wrong placement of adverbs of frequency
- Making clauses nominal
- Wrong placement of pronoun
TYPES OF AMBIGUITY cont’d
- (^) Wrong placement of adverbs of frequency:
- (^) Eg2. The lecturers who watched the movie frequently commended it. (frequently watched or commended it frequently?)
- (^) M1. The lecturers who frequently watched the movie commended it.
- (^) M2. The lecturers who watched the movie commended it frequently.
TYPES OF AMBIGUITY cont’d
- (^) Making Clauses Nominal
- (^) Eg3. The killing of the director incited the staff to riot. (did the director do the killing or someone else did?)
- (^) M1. The killing (done) by the director incited the staff to riot.
- (^) M2. The CEO’s killing of the director incited the staff to riot.
Exercise
Instruction : Each of the following sentences is ambiguous. Rewrite each sentence twice to show two acceptable meanings:
- An advertising agent who had entered the conference hall briskly delivered a talk on laptop computers.
- The Asafo Company spotted the missing child with a basket of fruit that was going mould.
- At that party I spotted a guest with a smile that quickly captivated me.
- We were introduced to the manager with a lovely face that we found agreeable. (Opoku-Agyemang 1998:87-88)
Misrelated/Dangling Modification
- (^) It is an absence of clarity normally attributed to the misplacement of the sentence modifier (Opoku-Agyemang 1998).
- (^) This occurs as a result of the construction of sentences in a way that modifiers are attached or attributed to the wrong subject or to a subject which cannot be identified in the sentence (Sekyi-Baidoo 2003)
- (^) It is the attachment of modifiers to constructions which they (modifiers) are not to modify or qualify (Afreh 2006).
Causes of Misrelated/Dangling Modification
- (^) Misplacement of Subject: This is where the subject that is to be modified is wrongly placed or positioned in the sentence.
- (^) Eg1: Moving towards the hall of residence , the goat hit the car.
- (^) Eg2: As a student , the Principal advised George to study hard.
- (^) Correction: Place or position the subject in the right position.
- (^) CEg1: Moving towards the hall of residence, the car hit the goat.
- (^) CEg2: As a student, George was advised by the Principal to study hard.
Causes of Misrelated/Dangling Modification
Cont’d
- (^) Omission of Subject: This is where the subject that is to be modified is omitted from the sentence.
- (^) Eg1: While watching TV , the lights went off.
- (^) Eg2: Running into the room , her wedding date was announced.
- (^) Correction: Introduce the missing subject.
- (^) CEg1: While we were watching TV, the lights went off.
- (^) CEg2: Running into the room, she announced her wedding date.
Reading Assignment
Read on the following and make your personal notes on them:
- (^) Forms of Misrelated/Dangling Modification (Afreh 2006; Sekyi-Baidoo 2003)
- (^) Exceptions to the prohibition on misrelated/dangling modification (Afreh 2006) or Acceptable Misrelated/Dangling Modification (Sekyi-Baidoo 2003)
Exercise
Instruction : Each of the following sentences has misrelated/dangling modification. Rewrite each into an acceptable form:
- Having arrived late for practice, a written excuse was needed.
- Without knowing his name, it was difficult to introduce him.
- To improve his results, the experiment was done again.
- After reading the original study, the article remains unconvincing.
- The experiment was a failure, not having studied the lab manual carefully.