I think from the first essay, I definitely did not know the direction. I felt like this was the first big
piece of writing I did in this class and I definitely found it a challenge. I definitely think that in the
critical paper I did really well at mapping and making a rough draft for my paper. I also wrote
down any piece of information I found important to talk about, especially before I wrote the
paper. One thing I would want to work on is the grammatical mistakes, which I tend to make. I
will definitely watch out for that, this time around. There are definitely more things that I worked
on, especially during the proposal time. I tried to take in the feedback and make a better thesis
statement. Which is also something I struggle with a lot. Finally, I think I would want to write
down my ideas and map out how I am going to execute my paper. I will also improve on MLA
citation. The first time I did that type of citation, I did get many wrong but during the critical paper
I paid more attention to detail and made sure that majority of it was correct. I will definitely
improve further, as it is outside my comfort zone. Since I usually utilize APA.
