WHAT IS A TRANSITION?
In writing, a transition is a word or phrase that connects one idea to another. This connection
can occur within a paragraph or between paragraphs. Transitions are used to show how sen-
tences or paragraphs are related to each other and how they relate to the overall theme of the
paper.
Example:
P1: The author’s work includes many examples of symbolism.
P 2: In the story, multiple themes are present.
Revision:
P1: The author’s work includes many examples of symbolism.
P2: In addition to the symbolism in the text, multiple themes are present.
Rationale: The transition helps to show how the two paragraphs are related and helps to show
the reader the underlying similarities.
USING TRANSITIONS BETWEEN PARAGRAPHS
Transitions can be useful between paragraphs to connect two ideas. Effective transitions high-
light the key information from one paragraph to the next and help to create a logic flow be-
tween ideas. These transitions do not always have to use transitional words or phrases; how-
ever, they can be useful. P1 represents the last sentence in paragraph one. P2 represents the
first sentence of paragraph two. The transitional phrase is bolded and italicized.
USING TRANSITIONS WITHIN A PARAGRAPH
Transitions may be used at various times within a paragraph to show the connections between
sentences. Here are some examples:
Example: The main character displays strength and courage throughout the story. He shows
fear and apprehension when he encounters the antagonist.
Revision: The main character displays strength and courage throughout the story. However,
he shows fear and apprehension when he encounters the antagonist.
Rationale: The use of the transition in this case helps to show the contrast between the two
ideas while also connecting them.
Example: In the novel, there are many tragic events that take place. The prince’s untimely
death occurs two days before the wedding.
Revision: In the novel, there are many tragic events that take place. For example, the
prince’s untimely death occurs two days before the wedding.
Rationale: The transition helps to connect the idea to the example that follows.
