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Evaluate A Narrative Assessment English 4 Flvs Assignment
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Element Original Text My Narrative Explanation Setting “The children’s section of the Colored Methodist Episcopal Church” Maya is getting ready to go to the Colored Methodist Episcopal Church. The setting stays true to the original story. Plot “I was going to look like one of the sweet little white girls who were everyone’s dream of what was right with the world.” Maya gains confidence and stands up for herself at the church. I changed the part where she is scared to where she is confident and stands up herself. Characterization Indirect characterization. Indirect characterization. The actions that occur are an indirect characterization through Mays’s actions and thoughts. Conflict The conflict is racism and discrimination The conflict is racism and discrimination, and it is a character vs. society kind of conflict. It is Maya having to deal with racism and discrimination due to society. Point of View First and third point of view. First and third point of view. It shows the point of view of Maya, her mom, and the church. Theme Racism and discrimination. Racism and gaining the confidence to stand up Maya must deal with racism due to her skin Unless Otherwise Noted All Content © 2022 Florida Virtual School. FlexPoint Education Cloud™ is a trademark of Florida Virtual School.
for herself. color but gains the confidence to stand up for herself. Tone Unconfident and anxious. Confident and positive. I changed the tone to a more self-assured and positive Maya. Dialogue Maya, her mom, and the church. Maya, her mom, and the church. I kept the dialogue between Maya, her mom, and the church same. Intentional Narrative Technique Change Plot is used to explain what is going on in the story and gives us a brief explanation of the character etc. Plot is used to explain what is going on in the story and gives us a brief explanation of the character etc. Plot is one of the most important parts of telling a story and what is going to happen. Reflection Reflection on my narrative is that I made many changes on the scene that I choose to rewrite. The scene I chose to rewrite from the beginning of the book is where Maya is getting ready to go to church but then is discriminated against for her skin color. But the change that I made was that I made it where Maya gains this new confidence where knows that she is beautiful, and it doesn’t matter about her race or skin color. Also, I made the change where she gains the confidence to stand up for herself against the church. Unless Otherwise Noted All Content © 2022 Florida Virtual School. FlexPoint Education Cloud™ is a trademark of Florida Virtual School.