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Yertle the Turtle was king of the pond. A nice little pond. It was clean. It was neat. The water was warm. There was plenty to eat.
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Review: Claim/topic sentences must both offer a hint of the supporting claim that will be talked about in the following paragraph as well as remind the reader of the argument. For example, from the story, Yertle the Turtle, by Dr. Seuss: Dr. Seuss suggests that even the smallest actions undertaken by those belonging to the lowest social class can improve society. He shows this through the action of the lowly turtle Mack. Directions: In the blank provided, assign the claim/topic sentences a number from 5 (strong) to 1 (weak). Then list TWO reasons for assigning the statements that value.
Directions: In the blank provided, assign the Lead-In sentences a number from 5 (strong) to 1 (weak). Then list TWO reasons for assigning the statements that value. Thesis: In “Yertle the Turtle,” Dr. Seuss suggests that even the smallest actions undertaken by those belonging to the lowest social class can improve society. He shows this through the actions of the lowly turtle Mack. Claim/topic sentence: Mack takes action to enrich his turtle society which shows anyone can make a difference.
BAD EVIDENCE: “Then again, from below, in the great heavy stack, came a groan from that plain little turtle named Mack.”
BAD EVIDENCE: “You’ve no right to talk to the world’s highest turtle. I rule from the clouds! Over land! Over sea! There’s
BAD EVIDENCE: But, as Yertle, the Turtle King, lifted his hand and started to order and give the command, that plain little
GOOD EVIDENCE: “And that plain little Mack did a plain little thing. He burped! And his burp shook the throne of the
Thesis 1: Homer suggests that when one achieves fame and valor for himself, he always harms his loved ones. This idea is illustrated through Odysseus’s adventures with Polyphemus, Skylla, and Laertes. Odysseus’s search for fame brings unnecessary harm to his crew on the island of Polyphemus. After struggling to help his crew escape from the cave of Polyphemus, Odysseus cannot help but taunt the Cyclops: “How do you like the beating that we gave you,/ you damned cannibal?…[I]f ever mortal man inquire/ how you were put to shame and blinded, tell him/ Odysseus, raider of cities, took your eye” (9:521-522,549-551). Odysseus yells these insults in order to capture fame and valor for himself. Here, he is not thinking about his crew and their safety. His desire to let others know how powerful he is leads to Polyphemus’ curse that he “lose all companions, and return/ under strange sail to bitter days at home” (9:584-585). Indeed, after making offerings to Zeus, and having them rejected, Odysseus realizes that Zeus has planned “destruction for [his] ships…/ and death for those who sail them, [his] companions” (9:606-607). Odysseus’s boastful comments lead to his prolonged punishment at sea, but more important, they bring about the destruction of his men. These men, who have entrusted their lives to Odysseus, die because of Odysseus’s desire for fame and recognition. Therefore, Odysseus’s arrogance, and his subsequent search for valor, directly cause the punishment and destruction of those whom he should care for and protect the most. Thesis 2: Homer suggests that although one’s long-term fate may be predetermined by the gods, the way in which one’s fate is fulfilled can be altered by one’s own actions and personal choices. He shows this through Odysseus’ actions with Polyphemus. Odysseus’ actions with Polyphemus show that although one’s long-term fate may be predetermined by the gods, the way in which one’s fate is fulfilled can be altered by one’s own actions and personal choices. Odysseus has used his cunning to plan an escape for his men from the cave of the Cyclops. In this plan, Odysseus blinds Polyphemus, ensures that no other Cyclops will come to help the hurting Polyphemus and also makes certain the Polyphemus does not know his true name, thus saving his men from experiencing any wrath from the gods. However, as Odysseus and his men are sailing away from the Cyclops’ island, safe from any harm, Odysseus “call[s] out to the Cyclops, just to rub it in” and tells the Cyclops that “if anyone, any mortal man, asks you how you got your eye put out, tell him that Odysseus the marauder did it” (Homer 9. 474, 500-502). Here, Odysseus chooses to expose himself to Polyphemus “just to rub it in” and show off his own supposed superiority over the Cyclops. Odysseus’ own hubris exposes himself and his men; his choice to give his real name to Polyphemus then has disastrous consequences. Polyphemus prays to his father, Poseidon, who is the god of the sea. Poseidon is so displeased with Odysseus’ actions that Poseidon curses Odysseus’ journey home, thus lengthening the trip, creating dangerous situations for Odysseus’ men and affecting Odysseus’ fate as the king of Ithaca. If Odysseus had not chosen to reveal his name, Polyphemus and Poseidon would never have known who he was; Odysseus could have made it quickly home. Instead, Odysseus’ desire to reveal himself as “the marauder” alters the course of his fate by prolonging his journey home. Thesis 3: Sophocles suggests that overwhelming pride is the cause of a hero’s downfall. Oedipus has proven himself to be a hero for Thebes in many instances but his overwhelming pride in himself is the flaw that leads Oedipus to his downfall. Oedipus is charged with the task of eradicating the plague from Thebes, which means finding out who killed Laius. In his quest for knowledge, he seeks help from the prophet Tiresias, who informs Oedipus that it was Oedipus who killed the king. Enraged by what he thinks is a false accusation, Oedipus seeks to discredit Tiresias by showing the power of his own actions. Oedipus says, “You offered no answer told you by the birds or the gods. No. I came, know-nothing Oedipus, I stopped the Sphinx. I answered the riddle with my own intelligence – the birds had nothing to teach me” (Sophocles 24). Here, Oedipus boasts of his own accomplishments; he reminds Tiresias of how he was the one to stop the Sphinx and emphasizes that he accomplished this feat individually and without the help of prophecy that Tiresias must rely on. Oedipus uses personal pronouns (like “I” or “my” or “me”) five times, which shows his constant appraisal of and emphasis on his own actions. He calls himself “know-nothing Oedipus,” a name that is meant to showcase Oedipus’s pride about how he has the power and “intelligence” within himself to find solutions and does not need to depend on Tiresias’ gift of insight that was given by the gods. Oedipus’ constant desire to focus on himself and show the individual nature of his power showcases the level of pride with which he views himself. Oedipus’ hubris becomes apparent in the way that he seeks to emphasize the individual and unique nature of his accomplishments.
Introductions are like “funnels” --- broad at the top and more specific and focused as they go down. Checklist for a Properly “Funneled” Introduction Try ONE of the “outside idea” funneling techniques Cite the technique if required using a parenthetical citation Comment on the relevant portion of the technique in your own words Use a transition word/phrase Type out your Thesis Four Good “Outside Idea” Funneling Techniques The following four techniques are good ways to open an essay. They allow the writer to meet his or her goal of beginning the essay by providing the reader with a more general sense of his or her topic and its relevance. This portion of the essay should have NO specific references to the literary text. For the demonstration of each of the following techniques, pretend that your end thesis is: Pulling weeds is a good recreational activity for teens because it gets them outdoors, provides exercise, and gives a feeling of productivity and satisfaction.
soon, and be careful of asking too many questions in a row. Does lawn mowing have to be a terrible and torturous chore? There are thousands of teens across the nation who are discovering that lawn mowing and other outdoor chores can actually be quite fun.