draft de ingles de una practica | Ejercicios de Idioma Inglés

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Did you ever think that technology would advance so much to the point that we would not be

able to do without it?Inventions like  smartphones  arepart of  our  routine,  weuse  them

everyday,anditissoimportantthatifwedidnothavethemmanypeoplewouldnotknow

how  to  communicate  with  others,  because  they  would  feel  that  something  is

missing. Smartphones are necessary in these times,  sotheyhave aspectsin whichtheystand

outasintheuseof everydaylife, the addictionthatcangeneratehealthproblems.  Restate

the thesis

It is a fact that we use our smartphones to be useful in everyday life. That's why we have the

advantage that it helps us to be organized because you can program your schedules, to-dos,

appointments, alarms, etc. all from your smartphone with a few simple steps. and if in case

you are on your days off, as a result, you get bored, so you can watch videos, download

applications, play video games and even chat with your friends to pass the time. Thus, it is

totally a wonder of technology that helps us totally.

However, not everything is rosy, it is not a myth that excessive use of smartphones can lead to

addiction. One of the main causes of addiction is the dependence on smartphones, it can make

you paranoid if you don't have your smartphone at hand, as a result, it generates nerves when

you notice that your smartphone is missing. it can even be a great distractor, making you lose

focus, even in your classroom, and it is a great danger when you are driving your car.

Consequently, you may have an accident. Having a smartphone is having aresponsibility , one

that you must control and not depend on that need to use it all the time.

Another important factor is that in the long term it generates health problems. The use of the

smartphone can become dangerous over time because it brings with it mental and physical

problems; as a consequence, it generates headaches, muscle pain, stress, visual fatigue,

anxiety, insomnia, etc. problems that should be solved with a visit to the doctor. it is important

to know the consequences of prolonged use of the smartphone, so we could avoid suffering

these ailments.

inconclusion, the aspects of the smartphones in the use of daily life, the addiction that they

can generate, and the health problems, are aspects that we have to deal with. technologyhas

come to help us to make our life simpler, however, it is our responsibility to take care of

ourselves and enjoy its benefits, and not to abuse our smartphones.

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FIRST DRAFT FEEDBACK

Did you ever think that technology would advance so much to the point that we would not be able to do without it? Inventions like smartphones are part of our routine, we use them every day, and it is so important that if we did not have them many people would not know how to communicate with others, because they would feel that something is missing. Smartphones are necessary in these times, so they have aspects in which they stand out as in the use of everyday life, the addiction that can generate health problems. Restate the thesis It is a fact that we use our smartphones to be useful in everyday life. That's why we have the advantage that it helps us to be organized because you can program your schedules, to-dos, appointments, alarms, etc. all from your smartphone with a few simple steps. and if in case you are on your days off, as a result, you get bored, so you can watch videos, download applications, play video games and even chat with your friends to pass the time. Thus, it is totally a wonder of technology that helps us totally. However, not everything is rosy, it is not a myth that excessive use of smartphones can lead to addiction. One of the main causes of addiction is the dependence on smartphones, it can make you paranoid if you don't have your smartphone at hand, as a result, it generates nerves when you notice that your smartphone is missing. it can even be a great distractor, making you lose focus, even in your classroom, and it is a great danger when you are driving your car. Consequently, you may have an accident. Having a smartphone is having a responsibility, one that you must control and not depend on that need to use it all the time. Another important factor is that in the long term it generates health problems. The use of the smartphone can become dangerous over time because it brings with it mental and physical problems; as a consequence, it generates headaches, muscle pain, stress, visual fatigue, anxiety, insomnia, etc. problems that should be solved with a visit to the doctor. it is important to know the consequences of prolonged use of the smartphone, so we could avoid suffering these ailments. in conclusion, the aspects of the smartphones in the use of daily life, the addiction that they can generate, and the health problems, are aspects that we have to deal with. technology has come to help us to make our life simpler, however, it is our responsibility to take care of ourselves and enjoy its benefits, and not to abuse our smartphones.

FINAL DRAFT

Did you ever thought that technology would be so important for humanity? It is here to stay and make our lives simpler. Inventions like smartphones are part of our routine, we use them every day, and it is so important that it keeps us connected to the outside world. Smartphones are necessary in these times, so they have aspects in which they stand out as in the use of everyday life, the addiction we can develop, and health problems. It is a fact that we use our smartphones to be useful in everyday life. That's why we have the advantage that it helps us to be organized because you can program your schedules, to-dos, appointments, alarms, etc. All from your smartphone with a few simple steps. If in case you are on your days off, as a result, you get bored, so you can watch videos, download applications, play video games and even chat with your friends to pass the time. Thus, it is totally a wonder of technology that helps us totally. However, not everything is rosy, it is not a myth that excessive use of smartphones can lead to addiction. One of the main causes of addiction is the dependence on smartphones, it can make you paranoid if you don't have your smartphone at hand, as a result, it generates nerves when you notice that your smartphone is missing. It can even be a great distractor, making you lose focus, even in your classroom, and it is a great danger when you are driving your car. Consequently, you may have an accident. Having a smartphone is having a responsibility. One that you must control and not depend on that need to use all the time. Another important factor is that in the long term it generates health problems. The use of the smartphone can become dangerous over time because it brings with it mental and physical problems; as a consequence, it generates headaches, muscle pain, stress, visual fatigue, anxiety, insomnia, etc. Problems that should be solved with a visit to the doctor. It is important to know the consequences of prolonged use of smartphones, so we could avoid suffering these ailments. In conclusion, the aspects of the smartphones in the use of daily life, the addiction that they can generate, and the health problems, are aspects that we have to deal with. Technology has come to help us to make our life simpler, however, it is our responsibility to take care of ourselves and enjoy its benefits, and not to abuse our smartphones.

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