WRITING: A NARRATIVE
THE FOX
To begin with, it was my best friend’s eleventh birthday and she was having a party in
her farm. Her parents had prepared lots of activities for us and we were having such a
fantastic time.
At that moment, me and Julia were riding two of her ponies. Unexpectedly, a fox
jumped into the ponies’ field, which was surrounded by a wooden fence, and started to
run wildly. Immediately, the ponies began to run, as they were frightened by the fox.
While that was happening, Julia and I were still onto the two ponies, which were
jumping and running without control. I had never felt so terrified in my whole life.
Some minutes later, Julia fell off her pony as she couldn’t resist its movements.
Immediately, she burst out crying. After that, something amazing happened. Her dog
Rudolph saw her in danger and crying on the floor, and he jumped into the ponies’ field
and started to chase the fox. In the end, the fox left and the ponies stopped running.
It was a day I’ll never forget, as it was the worst experience of my life! Since that day, I
have never ridden a pony again.
