ESSAY C1
Introduction
Many people today think…
Nowadays there is a problem with…
It could be said that…
Presenting argument( 2 paragraphs)
For this reason… In contrast…
As a result,… Although….
This is due to… While…
On the other hand, Many people feel…
According to… As for my advice…
Conclusion
I am in favour of… On the whole, …
It seems to me that… Overall, …
Example
Everyone is very concerned about the environment nowadays, but not
everyone considers the enviroment on a daily basis. In fact,
sometimes it is quite the opposite, so we need to look at how we can
get everyone actively involved in environmental issues.
As for my advice we can try and make it easier for people to
contribute to helping improve their enviroment. Firstly, i believe it
could be a good idea to create very straightforward leaflets with some
clear and simple advice that everyone can follow. These could be
dropped directly into people’s homes. In this way, local residents Will
definitely see them and maye ven, for example, keep the leaflet in their
kitchen as a checklist to follow.
Another immediate way to involve communities would be to set
up ‘clean-up’ groups. These groups could not only do occasional
cleaning of neglected áreas such as Parks but members could also train
to become mentors who go into schools and make students aware of
how they can help.
Overall, i would suggest that having clean-up groups may be the
most effective route to involving people more widely in enviromental
issues because it is very active and so likely to encourage young
people’s involvement. And these people Will be the next generation
